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God's Mercy

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We've all heard the story about the giant fox that could crumble mountains and cause tsunamis with a mere swish of any of its giant tails, a being manipulated on a dark night by a dark man with a dark purpose. But there is another version of this story, a version where the fox with the power to cause such great catastrophes was the dark man on a dark night with a dark purpose.

Minato Namikaze, the Yondaime Tamakage of Mount Oinari, had finally given in to an insanity that had plagued him throughout his life, and attacked the very village he was supposed to protect. And so powerful was Minato that even the involvement of powerful clans from the Aburame to the Yamanaka wasn't enough.

Eventually, it took the divine intervention of Hiruzen Sarutobi, the God of Shinobi, and the lives of all eight of his saintly friends to enclose the fallen one in a previously forbidden seal. But like his Miltonian predecessor, Minato just wouldn't give up.

Hiruzen followed the glowing orb that carried Minato's soul to a cave where he saw it absorb into a moving shape snuffling around in the darkness. Once his vision adjusted, the wizened Sarutobi saw that it was a fox kit, newly whelped judging from its closed eyes and the moisture present in the creature's fur and the bed of straw it lay upon.

"Sensei!"

Hiruzen turned to see his former student Jiraiya silhouetted in the cave entrance.

"I came as soon as I could. But I guess it wasn't soon enough."

The Toad Sage had been at the hot springs near the Futami Okitama Shrine, conducting his "research," when a shudder ran through him. He'd immediately turned in the direction of his former village and raced there in his demon form, only to find his old home decimated and his sensei following a glowing orb that had to be his nephew's soul.

Jiraiya cursed himself. He'd trained Minato one-on-one for years after the boy had finally had enough of his father Inari's white supremacist abuse. And during that time, the Sannin swore he saw a certain glint in his nephew's eyes every time they trained. An insane, murderous glint that he'd always written off as his imagination.

Dammit all. If it weren't for his wishful thinking, he could've done something, however infinitesimal, to change the course of his nephew, to prevent such destruction, for once in his life to actually save someone from themselves—

Shaking off these thoughts, he saw his sensei still standing over the kyuubi no kogitsune, deep in thought.

The God of Shinobi sneered at the once-glowing seal that had since darkened into a crimson swirl on the fox whelp's belly. Minato really was a methodical bastard, sealing himself inside a living thing instead of submitting to a fate set in stone. And not just any living thing either; he chose his own kit.

He could hear the bakemono taunting him now. Go on, old man. Kill me, along with this little whelp of mine. Prove to me that you are like me. Prove to me that you had what it takes to be Tamakage. Go on! Accept this sacrifice! Show me that you are a true God of Shinobi!

Hiruzen backed away, disgusted, then turned from the kit whose cries for its mother's milk still echoed throughout the cave.

Brushing off Jiraiya's attempt to calm him, the former Sandaime paced, forcing back the bile that had arisen at his successor's words. This was the perfect opportunity to bring an ultimate end; to give some meaning to the deaths of his friends, of his beloved Biwako, their daughter Taji; to accomplish his divine mission of vanquishing the evil that had plagued and almost destroyed the land he once ruled. Yes, this was the perfect opportunity to achieve that end...

Then it hit him. Minato wanted him to kill this kit. To ultimately prove that in the end, he was willing to spill innocent blood, for whatever reason.

Just like the cold-blooded false idol who'd succeeded him.

No. He wouldn't do it. He wouldn't sink to that monster's level, not even to avenge his fallen friends, villagers, and family.

He turned to the straw bed where the kit lay, passing his concerned student, before gathering the creature in his arms like a newborn babe. Jiraiya cautiously approached his old teacher.

"What'll you do, sensei?"

"He will live, and I will make sure he doesn't end up like his father." From the corner of his eye, he could see his student smiling with relief. "I wonder where Kushina is…"

Jiraiya's smile dissipated. "I saw her on my way here. She didn't notice me, but from what I saw, she was running away and never looking back."

Silence passed once more between the two men. "I'll have to raise him myself, then." He and Biwako had raised three children before, and one of them, Asuma, was now a renowned Jounin. Surely, this wouldn't be any different.

"I'll have to give him a name…"

Yet more silence, until Hiruzen perked up, a jade's luster in the darkness. "Naruto."

"Naruto? As in—"

"Yes. That gutsy ninja who wouldn't give up until he brought peace to a warring world. And I dare say that story was much better than that smut you usually publish."

"This from a guy who regularly reads said smut?" He couldn't help but laugh at the look the old goat shot him. Still, to think that his sensei had actually read it, when it was a total flop in an industry where sex sold... The only other person who had read it had been—No. Now was not the time to think about that...

"Are ya sure about this, sensei? I mean, 'Naruto' was just something that popped into my head while eating ramen one day..."

"I'm quite sure, Jiraiya. If I'm going to raise him right, I might as well name him right. And it has a good ring to it, too. Naruto Uzumaki…"

"Uzumaki? But that's—"

"—his mother's name. Yes, I'm aware of that. But I also know that Minato's name will be taboo to the villagers. Besides, even though she abandoned her son, she's far less at fault than Minato was."

He waited for an argument from Jiraiya, but received none.

The rest, as they say, was history. On the morn following the darkest night of Oinari's history, Sarutobi Hiruzen resumed his position as Sandaime Tamakage, starting a new era from the ashes of his successor's. And with him was someone whom he'd spared because he was a God of Mercy and not the False God of Bloodshed and Sacrifice, who with the right guidance could become a hero that everyone would look up to and tell tales of for centuries to come.

Hiruzen turned to the furry nine-tailed bundle who now lay fast asleep in the bed of blankets his new guardian arranged for him.

"Welcome home… Naruto Uzumaki."
A pre-pilot chapter fic about the Sandaimethe Chief's decision to spare Naruto in spite of his father's wrongdoings.

Pilot chapter, Mt. Oinari, Uzumaki Kushina and Naruto, Sarutobi Hiruzen/Chief, Biwako, Taji, Asuma, Namikaze Minato/Naruto’s pilot!father, Jiraiya © Masashi Kishimoto
Pilot!Kyuubi = Namikaze Minato, Inari (demon), Jiraiya = Minato’s uncle, Taji = Hiruzen and Biwako’s daughter, the title of Tamakage, Futami Okitama Shrine, story © me

www.mangarush.com/manga/naruto… for those unfamiliar with the pilot chapter.

And for those wondering why I even mesh Kyuubi with Minato at all: UberChimerism.deviantart.com/a…
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IzzyMarrie's avatar
Great job as always. It amazes me, your phenominal way of writing. This will be far beyond amazing if you decide to continue