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The Surpassing Origin
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Charging forth from the Tree Divine,
He would consort with the Goddess Leporine.
A lesson in chakra a day
Kept all her cares away.
Recline he did at the base of his bole,
A world of troubles nothing to his unminding soul.
Begat he a feathered robe,
Edification for she who ruled the globe.
Alas, no more.
Sired he one who rived him into spores;
Torn was he, rent into the world beyond,
Seeds sown hither, thither, and yon.
He would consort with the Goddess Leporine.
A lesson in chakra a day
Kept all her cares away.
Recline he did at the base of his bole,
A world of troubles nothing to his unminding soul.
Begat he a feathered robe,
Edification for she who ruled the globe.
Alas, no more.
Sired he one who rived him into spores;
Torn was he, rent into the world beyond,
Seeds sown hither, thither, and yon.
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Inspired by her poems for Black Zetsu and both our takes on Kaguya, I decided to write a little something for Harafu, the Ten-Headed and Ten-Tailed Kodama who surpassed and originated oh so much...
What think you of this humble attempt at verse, my dears?
Also, cookies to all who can tell me what poetic form this is 
Kaguya and Hagoromo Ōtsutsuki, the God Tree © Masashi Kishimoto
Harafu, this poem © me
Inspired by her poems for Black Zetsu and both our takes on Kaguya, I decided to write a little something for Harafu, the Ten-Headed and Ten-Tailed Kodama who surpassed and originated oh so much...
What think you of this humble attempt at verse, my dears?
Also, cookies to all who can tell me what poetic form this is Kaguya and Hagoromo Ōtsutsuki, the God Tree © Masashi Kishimoto
Harafu, this poem © me
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Enjoy the mental noms. <3
Okay, so I was skyping with Dan when I saw that I had a mention from you, and I read in your description: " cookies to all who can tell me what poetic form this is "
All I could think of (other than the feeling of pure awesomeness that you wrote this) was: "Damnit, I want that cookie."
THIS. THIS deserves a cookie of your very own. Let me hand present you via virtually: cdn.cavemancircus.com/wp-conte…
Enjoy the mental noms. <3